Anastasia Khaye this is quite an interesting topic! You have me curious about what Web 2.0 is! I’d love to read your essay if you could link it. Your second main body paragraph topic seems a bit vague, at least for me. Social media of cool people means what? Is it the number of followers they have or the fact that their content isn’t cringe-worthy. It seems a bit vague, but regardless it seems to be a topic that could have quite the impact if put in front of the right audience. Nice outline and good subject!